A passion beating in my chest
a pain breaking through my heart.
My mind thinking of the best,
just wondering where to start.
A passion flowing through my body,
piercing every part of me with joy.
The girl I love not so snobby,
She will never be my toy.
Note from MH: I have posted this song before, wanted to post it again. I wrote it during a beautiful moment in my life, but not all beautiful moments are lasting, which is why they are moments...still I felt I should let it float about as a snapshot of happiness.
Constant consumption Without ever thinking twice And I've been looking But nothing comes without a price I've tried my best To find some good advice And now I'm starting to see That nothing will suffice
Bring me back the bliss Hold my heart in eternal darkness You drowned me in love And I haven't since breathed Now our love's only make believe My tears have been running rivers down my cheeks I've struggled so much I've grown broken and weak
Submitted by wstone1994 on Wed, 01/12/2011 - 16:35
Watch as the bullets are flying And your children are crying While your young ones are dying Can you see the blood on your hands? Watch as the buildings explode Speak in secret codes As the world around you corrodes Can’t you understand?
Submitted by Malicepoint on Mon, 05/31/2010 - 10:42
The way this goes may be way off may usual flow, but who's to say I'm swiggin with this bitch ass mike in the underground,
Who's to say that I'm not myself because I'm a regular guy, with his big blue jeans, and tight ass shirt, he went to school for the hell of it,not knowing where to go or what to say because I'm a regular guy.
Submitted by viewtiful12 on Mon, 09/07/2009 - 23:47
I was full of glee Walkin' around DV When I tripped and a'scraped my knee On the concrete / I almost screamed Fear of gangrene Overcame me. Hoped that someone Would find me and save me / I watched the blood seep From the leg, it hurt But I didn't really wanna Let the scrape get worse So, standing up
Submitted by TerrisMist on Mon, 11/29/2004 - 20:43
A Beautiful Dragon
When you look into her eyes You are blinded by beauty?s light And when you try to find her She is swift like a hunter Going her own way back to me Everyone?s just going free.
Submitted by truthserum887 on Sun, 12/10/2006 - 23:25
The candle’s lit Spark starts the fire The wrist is slit A smile is cut inside her The blood just drips Another mess from the liar On medication slips Today she’s a survivor
She can say its all the same But she can’t fake this pain away She’s forced to find a way To smile throughout the day
Once we were lovers, now we're not even friends Thought our love was stronger than all the rest I thought you would be here, until the end Like you said..... Like you said....
Sitting on a bench, staring up at the sky, Thousands of questions enter my head but I wonder why, After all this time we've been together, I wanted it to last forever. Kissing you softly yet so hard, Wanting you in my arms, But now my hopes and dreams are shattered, Now nothing matters...anymore...
Submitted by wstone1994 on Fri, 02/04/2011 - 13:50
Where has the innocence gone? Why have the years flown by? Gone are the days of fun Tell me why have we got to fly? Why can't we stay the same As when we were care-free? With dreams of fortune and fame And being the ruler of all we see
Submitted by TerrisMist on Mon, 11/29/2004 - 20:44
COTN Unite
I walked in some time Creatures they were called I was greeted by them all They took me in And now im here But where is here? Im not alone A happy place But in the dark!
Creatures of the Night Are the people in the dark They are never seen But they are hidden there.
Okay, I am not well known for keeping my feelings to myself, only in rare occasions though- and typically if there's women involved- but here? On a public amateur writing website ? I think not. Not if a belly full of beer can also command a type.
Wrap your arms around my waist, Your lips have a loving taste, Wrap my arms around your neck, Slowly we'll take a few steps. Take my hand and around I swirl, Your fingers in my hair trill.
Please one more song, Before the clock strikes dawn.
Your Heaven is my Hell
The soul is just something to sell
Spoonfeed hypocrisy to the mouths of the weak
Give them demons when it's the angels they seek
Here's to the purity of violating innocence
While you're on your knees, subject to benevolence
Negative emotion feeds the infection!
The madness of the mind feeds the beast inside!
(And brings him alive...)
His TEETH will pierce your flesh
And YOU'LL be laid to rest
The RAGE of every day
Will lead the animal straight to you!
_________________________________________
I'm the one that's destroying your dreams
I'm the sparkle in the dead man's eyes
Only I can show you what it means
To have your wildest dreams realised
This world could be yours forevermore
Don't let the fearful lead you astray now
You can't protect your kids anymore
For I am the one they obey now
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