To watch someone sleep

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How beautiful is it to watch a loved one sleep?
To see their peaceful face in the shadows of night
To see light smiles carved on their lips as they dream

How precious is it to watch a loved one sleep?
To listen to their breathing
To watch the light movement of their eyelids while they dream

How beautiful is it to feel a loved one sleep?
To caress their hair carefully
as if they would break

It is indeed beautiful to watch a loved one sleep
It's peaceful,serene
One of the best times that there will be.

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kt6550's picture
Very nice. Excellent imagery.
Heartcrusher's picture
perfectly written :)
Madhatter's picture
This makes me want to watch someone sleep...hehe, Nice poem. Error (I think) ..."while their dream" were you meaning "while they dream"?
Hiljenta's picture
true :) always typing too hastily ... thanks for the heads up!

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