Out Of The Shadows

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Damned yesterday‘s morning
I‘m sailing the ocean on the boat
And the voices are calling
But I‘ll never go back anymore

The stalker is coming for me
He‘s smelt my scent on the road
From behind I feel his breath
As the ultimate survival mode

Is there somebody who‘ll take me out?

Out of the shadows of my life
Getting off a darker part
Here I feel the exhausting dry
But the God is on my side
Out of the shadows of my life
Searching for a little piece of light
I must upkeep my pride
When the God is on my side

His eyes are staring at me
In his hands he holds a gun
It‘s only about my esprit
The first bump is yet to come

His greatest weakness
Lies within his cold heart
I took up the dagger
And stabbed him right there inside

From the maniacal guild I‘m going out…

Out of the shadows of my life
Getting off a darker part
Here I feel the exhausting dry
But the God is on my side
Out of the shadows of my life
Searching for a little piece of light
I must upkeep my pride
When the God is on my side

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kt6550's picture
Nice. Very well written.
Madhatter's picture
Definitely sounds like epic poetry. Medievel or barbaric is what I thought of as I read this. The rhythm is nice, and I like how you said "The God" rather God. I don't know it changed what I envisioned him as just with adding "The." Aw but I am one of those weirdo's who notices peculiar things.

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