Wants and Needs

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The need to feel loved.
The need to feel someone caress your skin, kiss your lips...
The need to be wanted..
The need to want...to crave..
The need to feel....
Passion. Desire.
Love.

The need to feel happy.
The need to feel sad.
The need to feel mad.
The want to smile.
The want to cry.
The want to scream.
The need to feel emotions.

The need to know someone cares..
The need to know you aren't alone..
The need to care..
The want to live.
The want to socialize.
The want to try.
The need to try.

All these needs...
All these wants...
Tearing me up inside.
I know what is right.
But I don't want that.
I want exactly the opposite.

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savage_cushions's picture
This is really nice, one suggestion; maybe change 'caress your skin/kiss your lips' to 'caress my skin/kiss my lips', in line 2
kt6550's picture
This is really quite interesting. Nicely done.
Imissmeaning's picture
Savage: Actually yes that is a very good idea. I like that much better. Thank you for the idea and your lovely comment. (: Kt: Thank you! (: Madhatter: Ah, it seems we are like in more than just the music aspect, yes? Haha. Glad to see I am not the only one who feels like this..(: Thanks for the comment. (:

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