AN:Hey guys, it's been a while. Well, I'm back with some poetry, and while I feel this piece isn't particularly strong I felt like sharing it. I will say that critiques are welcome as always, but I would like to ask that you be gentle in this particular case, because this poem is awfully personal for me.
Love is the most beautiful lie that compels us to accomplish unimaginable acts. The very lie that makes us swear and promise eternal commitment is in itself a limited anomaly. This fairy tale goes hand in hand with the most amazingly stunning creature ever known to man.
Shivers run up my spine as I feel the cold air.
The moonlight gleams, cascading my curves.
Dressed in nakedness, I lay before you.
My chest synchronized with rapid breaths
...of wanting you.
During a Dash activity the other evening, the chosen word was "blushon." It is a French adaptation of two English words, meaning "to apply makeup." Well, here is what I ended up writing.
I'm Not sure that's right.
Live It Forward..
Makes a bit more sense to me.
I gave a one eye, crippled man $1.30 today for Bus Fair.
He only needed 5 Ones for his Five Dollar bill,
No one spoke, so I said
"We got 130, if you can find 20 cents, you on the bus"
He was stoked...
I'm experimenting with writing drama... or something like that, so, not really sure where this will go, just popped into my head. I am curious about your opinion.
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