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Prophecy of the Red Witch
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Overall Rating: 88.0666666667%
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This writing has been rated by 3 members, resulting in a rating of 88.0666666667% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:
Concept/Plot:
Depending on the writing type, give your opinion on the overall plot if it is a story, or the concept of the writing if it is abstract such as a poem. Does it seem to make sense, strike a chord with you or seem a well chosen concept? Did the author stick to the concept or did they change mid-thought? | 84.3333333333% |
Imagery:
Did the author use words and descriptions that allowed you to visualize the scenes portrayed in the writing? Did the feelings of the work stir your emotions as you read it? | 88.6666666667% |
Spelling and Grammar:
Were the words spelled correctly? Was proper punctuation and grammar used? Could you easily understand sentances or did you have to re-read lines several times to understand what was meant? | 90.3333333333% |
Flow/Rhythm:
Depending on the writing type, how did the writing flow? If it's a story, did it have a smooth, easy to follow flow? Did the flow of events make sense? If it's poetry, did the author stick with the syllable flow for that writing type? Did the lines rhyme properly if a rhyming device was used?
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Vocabulary:
Did the author use the same words over and over or did they use a broad vocabulary to get their exact point across? Could better wording be chosen then what they have? | 88.6666666667% | |
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Written by: AncientYouth
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Type: Essay
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Submitted: 1280628820
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Long ago, there was one, who was defied death. He was trapped in the bones left to him. And though he cried for the simplest of things, he was dragged away by the Enemy of the Madman. The enemy sacrificed himself to destroy the Man in Bones, but failed. The spirt fled, searching for a home. He found it in a small boy, and merged himself with the spirit of the boy, when the boy made a sacrifice of another mans flesh. And so the boy grew with the Man in Bones within him.
Now, to defeat the Blackened Godess, he must unlock the power inside him. He must free the Man in Bones.
In order to be granted the gift, He must kill himself in the moon and in the sun.
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on August 02 2010 00:16:53
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on August 02 2010 10:17:10
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on August 02 2010 19:26:14
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on August 02 2010 22:41:58
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