Last night i came up with a sequel to my story The Light of Two Hearts. ive been writing ever since and so far ive got 4 pages in. im really excited about it and i know im going to finish soon. plus ill be attempting something I havent done before im sure you'll all see that soon enough.
What we must consider are the implications of having full and free speech( the unimpeded ability to think as we please and the ability to express ourselves as we please) and weigh the costs or the worst-case scenarios of having such rights against the costs of the existence of stipulations that hinder these rights.
English language has always been the valentine with whom I’ve never had sex; the full-fledged demoiselle that could be easily drawn to my peaceful lair but never wooed.
If he says it once again, I’ll kill him, she thought. If he says anything else… She was slouching over the kitchen sink and doing the dishes from dinner. If I had a dishwasher, I’d be standing in the middle of the living room now shouting at him. Sometimes less is really more. Fewer conveniences, more silence. Bitterly she gave a laugh and put another tumbler down on the dish towel. What does it matter that she doesn’t have a dishwasher, because her mother-in-law has made do with a mug all her life?
Hey guys, it's like 5 in the morning where I am, so if this is hard to understand I apologize. Anyway, recently I got pulled back into writing for a forum I used to RP for, and they want me to run a storyline. Cool, right?
After the "Restoran Jejantas"/"Overpass Restaurant" (It's an interesting concept isn't it, having your meal while the cars below speed you by.) on the northern highway, I was promptly greeted by a gauntlet of skyscrapers. Gigantic building blotted the Kuala Lumpur skyline, each competing to reach for the sky.
Night calls in echo to it's childeren,
A song thats forver sung.
Evil is in the eye of the beholder,
What's wrong for one may be good to some.
We are all born with natureal habbits,
We know what we must do.
Although it may take awhile to hatch this,
The idea of your intensions is in you.
The past couple of weeks or so Benson had been practicing Witch Craft. It all started when he picked up an ocult book about a year ago. He enjoyed it, it took up most of his time. The religon and belifs fasinated him. Although this mainly ment he spent most of his time alone, mostly in his room in the dark. Wich his friends did'nt get, mainly Chris, who made ramdom apperiences at his house. Bugging him, trying to get him out side, saying he was waisting his time.
The creation of the world, this would be a question pondered more than any other by man. One given many thought, and a many more answers. No doubt you've heard many different stories explaining our history, and the beginning of life. All sharing one common point, that it is the truth and all other beliefs are false. Some are believed and others are cast aside as myth and fantasy, all striving for the right to be the worlds single belief. For belief is what gives the story power, and power is what gives the story truth.
Life, love, pain.
The lessons we learn are our gain.
In the end the only who suffer
Are the ones who remain,
Here on earth they will rest
Never learning that wich is best.
The fact that we are more then physical shells.
What comes next lies within ourselves.
...
Cold, possibly frost bitten. The chill gusts of wind sent a numb sensation through her arms. All she could think about was her hands completely unprotected from the harsh climate. A warm burning sensation was sent through them every time the wind picked up again.
Head throbbing Azah awoke laying on a patch of soil. Confused she amediatly got up looking around to discover her last memory of her falling didn't seem to be a dream like she had hoped. She was in the middle of what looked like a dug hole with a high black cieling and a wall infront of her. Not seeing a way to go back she moved toward the wall, wich had a door in the middle of it and a big 'A'carved into it. The door had no door knob, but when she pushed on it it swung open into a shorter but much longer room.
The night was cold, dark, she had been sitting there for hours, or at least what seemed like hours. The cold hard cement was starting too ache her muscles and joints, she didn't even really know if she could stand if she wanted too. The night was growing on but she couldn't tell. There was a heavy over cast and nothing but a chill wind in the air. The desolated alley was starting too sicken her, this end of town always did.
At 6.00 am, I will evidently find myself awake and staring at the ceiling. I have continued this legacy for the past six years in my life with only a few exceptions. People in my profession would like to call it a positive habit
For anyone who has been wondering whether I am a spy, I regret to say it has been a wrong guess. Major Sullivan was calling me ‘Doc’ for a reason: I am one. Well, I am a psychotherapist. I do not go into the field armed with guns and a Kevlar, but if I declare any spy from the Agency a cuckoo, he might lose his chances of ever doing these.
The Major shrugged. From his movements, I got the vibe he was not hiding anything from me. Then again, how can I forget that the person in question was a spy?
‘If his info is so well secured, nothing was supposed to show up if you merely searched for a Mike Pritchett,’ I commented.
I have heard some horror stories about co-writing. its a 50% chance you will make a friend or lose one..lol personally I have never written with another, I don`t know if its true but its hard for others to accept change in their words, or what would fit the work better.
The sound made from the continuously ringing phone, had been going on and off for close to an hour. When the middle age man finally heard the constant chirping he had been dreaming of. Simply opening his eyes was a formidable challenge. Looking around the small space with blurred vision he finally realized he was at home; and some one was calling. Before the dim remembrance of yesterday faded back, the room started spinning and the urge to expel reminisce of the night before was over powering.
*sigh* so theres this girl that sits behind me in 3D modeling, ive seen her around before and ive had a previous class with her. But for some reason im feeling more and ore attracted to her each day. Shes small with short hair, pretty face, very quiet, she looks really sweet and innocent. But the problem im faceing is should I make an attempt to talk to her.
"Where is he!" yelled Simon as his patience decreased at a fast pace. "Oh calm down Simon, he is bound to be here any time soon." Brandon said in a irritated tone.
I think I need to prepare my characters and create more depth to them. Not knowing where to put these I decided here would be the best option.
So, if you would please take the time to check out the character I will eventually place here and give me pointers on how to increase their depth and how to write the character description better. Thankyou :)
A small village known as River Creek is border by skyscraping trees that embraced their homes. Though the villagers are given comfort by these monstrous trees, but they also fear them; This armada of trees is known as "The Death Locked Forest".
Parched white paper
Was anything ever written there?
Oh yes, oh yes the sweetness of life
With honey, nectar and spice.
The curious little butterfly dropped by
Just to have a sip or two
Drew in some nectar, then more and more
A strange seduction that she never knew before.
AN:Hey guys, it's been a while. Well, I'm back with some poetry, and while I feel this piece isn't particularly strong I felt like sharing it. I will say that critiques are welcome as always, but I would like to ask that you be gentle in this particular case, because this poem is awfully personal for me.
My inibility to be in peace makes me restless This object in my way makes the same occurace Night after night after night Making my mind twisted, and frustrated Though I may not know what is happening I do know that my ability to cope with it Is wearing thin Its horrible to not be able to understand
I miss you,
When you're gone.
I miss the way you hold me,
When you're gone.
I miss your kisses on my forehead,
When you're gone.
I miss your smile,
The way it crawls across your face,
When you're gone.
I miss your hands,
Just caressing mine,
When you're gone.
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