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My first poem ever

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( a 1/4; 2/3 stanza)

1) Pirate saw a little lamb, her fleece as dark as coal

2) The hat she wore

3) There in her door

4) In heart so full of soul

 

1) The question stands, to this old man, will lamb enjoy this rhyme

2) A dove so sweet

3) That I should meet

4) A child out of time

 

Sequel to The Light of Two Hearts

Last night i came up with a sequel to my story The Light of Two Hearts. ive been writing ever since and so far ive got 4 pages in. im really excited about it and i know im going to finish soon. plus ill be attempting something I havent done before im sure you'll all see that soon enough. 

Character Creation Background Story

A little feed back would be awesome!

 

Freedom of Speech and Thought

What we must consider are the implications of having full and free speech( the unimpeded ability to think as we please and the ability to express ourselves as we please) and weigh the costs or the worst-case scenarios of having such rights against the costs of the existence of stipulations that hinder these rights.

A Brief Report on Film and Language

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  English language has always been the valentine with whom I’ve never had sex; the full-fledged demoiselle that could be easily drawn to my peaceful lair but never wooed.

She smelled of mint

     If he says it once again, I’ll kill him, she thought. If he says anything else… She was slouching over the kitchen sink and doing the dishes from dinner. If I had a dishwasher, I’d be standing in the middle of the living room now shouting at him. Sometimes less is really more. Fewer conveniences, more silence.  Bitterly she gave a laugh and put another tumbler down on the dish towel. What does it matter that she doesn’t have a dishwasher, because her mother-in-law has made do with a mug all her life?

Repopulating Old Brains

Hey guys, it's like 5 in the morning where I am, so if this is hard to understand I apologize. Anyway, recently I got pulled back into writing for a forum I used to RP for, and they want me to run a storyline. Cool, right?

Song of the City

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                After the "Restoran Jejantas"/"Overpass Restaurant" (It's an interesting concept isn't it, having your meal while the cars below speed you by.) on the northern highway, I was promptly greeted by a gauntlet of skyscrapers. Gigantic building blotted the Kuala Lumpur skyline, each competing to reach for the sky.

Yang to Ying

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Night calls in echo to it's childeren,
A song thats forver sung.
Evil is in the eye of the beholder,
What's wrong for one may be good to some.
We are all born with natureal habbits,
We know what we must do.
Although it may take awhile to hatch this,
The idea of your intensions is in you.

Religon

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Dark is the begining,
light is the end.

This is the set of the religous trend.
Confusion fills all
And enlightenment comes then,
This is our goal to simply understand.

Light will fall,
Blessing you and friend.

one nights dream; Benson's view

The past couple of weeks or so Benson had been practicing Witch Craft. It all started when he picked up an ocult book about a year ago. He enjoyed it, it took up most of his time. The religon and belifs fasinated him. Although this mainly ment he spent most of his time alone, mostly in his room in the dark. Wich his friends did'nt get, mainly Chris, who made ramdom apperiences at his house. Bugging him, trying to get him out side, saying he was waisting his time.

Myth

The creation of the world, this would be a question pondered more than any other by man. One given many thought, and a many more answers. No doubt you've heard many different stories explaining our history, and the beginning of life. All sharing one common point, that it is the truth and all other beliefs are false. Some are believed and others are cast aside as myth and fantasy, all striving for the right to be the worlds single belief. For belief is what gives the story power, and power is what gives the story truth.

Life, love, pain

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Life, love, pain.
The lessons we learn are our gain.
In the end the only who suffer
Are the ones who remain,
Here on earth they will rest
Never learning that wich is best.
The fact that we are more then physical shells.
What comes next lies within ourselves.
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Hole

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Cold, possibly frost bitten. The chill gusts of wind sent a numb sensation through her arms. All she could think about was her hands completely unprotected from the harsh climate. A warm burning sensation was sent through them every time the wind picked up again.

Alone; Page 2

Head throbbing Azah awoke laying on a patch of soil. Confused she amediatly got up looking around to discover her last memory of her falling didn't seem to be a dream like she had hoped. She was in the middle of what looked like a dug hole with a high black cieling and a wall infront of her. Not seeing a way to go back she moved toward the wall, wich had a door in the middle of it and a big 'A'carved into it. The door had no door knob, but when she pushed on it it swung open into a shorter but much longer room.

Alone; Page 1

The night was cold, dark, she had been sitting there for hours, or at least what seemed like hours. The cold hard cement was starting too ache her muscles and joints, she didn't even really know if she could stand if she wanted too. The night was growing on but she couldn't tell. There was a heavy over cast and nothing but a chill wind in the air. The desolated alley was starting too sicken her, this end of town always did.

Chapter 3: In the jungle...

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“Hello, Major.” I watched him, sipping my Pepsi.

Major Sullivan took a seat opposite to me. He waited as I put my drink on the table.

“Why did you want to talk?”

“I need the file of a guy in the Agency.”

“I’m afraid I can’t….”

Chapter 1: Welcome to the Jungle

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Chapter 1

At 6.00 am, I will evidently find myself awake and staring at the ceiling. I have continued this legacy for the past six years in my life with only a few exceptions. People in my profession would like to call it a positive habit

Chapter 2: Shady works up the horizon

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For anyone who has been wondering whether I am a spy, I regret to say it has been a wrong guess. Major Sullivan was calling me ‘Doc’ for a reason: I am one. Well, I am a psychotherapist. I do not go into the field armed with guns and a Kevlar, but if I declare any spy from the Agency a cuckoo, he might lose his chances of ever doing these.

Chapter 4: ALL-IN!!!!!

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The Major shrugged. From his movements, I got the vibe he was not hiding anything from me. Then again, how can I forget that the person in question was a spy?

‘If his info is so well secured, nothing was supposed to show up if you merely searched for a Mike Pritchett,’ I commented.

The search for D3

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Hand in hand,

misery walked with me.

I searched and searched,

but could not find D3.

 

Four hours I looked,

five bus tokens I spent.

Everywhere was sold out,

so across the city I went.

 

"You should have reserved a copy."

Store clerks all pointed out.

"Fuck you kid!" and more,

Co-Writers?

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I have heard some horror stories about co-writing. its a 50% chance you will make a friend or lose one..lol personally I have never written with another, I don`t know if its true but its hard for others to accept change in their words, or what would fit the work better.

THE PAINTING

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I stole the colours from the artist’s den

To paint a picture, of our friendship my friend

Honesty and humour, companionship and strength

are amongst a few of what I wanted to paint.

 

I painted through the summers’ breeze

Frosty winters, autumn and spring

A picture so dear, I’ll paint through my years

"Mucho Tiempo Olvidudo" 2 one who remembers

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     The sound made from the continuously ringing phone, had been going on and off for close to an hour. When the middle age man finally heard the constant chirping he had been dreaming of. Simply opening his eyes was a formidable challenge. Looking around the small space with blurred vision he finally realized he was at home; and some one was calling. Before the dim remembrance of yesterday faded back, the room started spinning and the urge to expel reminisce of the night before was over powering.

cupid why do you bother with me?

*sigh* so theres this girl that sits behind me in 3D modeling, ive seen her around before and ive had a previous class with her. But for some reason im feeling more and ore attracted to her each day. Shes small with short hair, pretty face, very quiet, she looks really sweet and innocent. But the problem im faceing is should I make an attempt to talk to her.

Panic at the Healers Tent

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A random story

Rubber On Tarmac

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Sun in the expanse

Girl on the bike

Its a squeeze 

Sun in the eyes

Girl on the lip

of the seat

beer cold in plastic

promise.

Chapter: 1 - A Friday round up

"Where is he!" yelled Simon as his patience decreased at a fast pace. "Oh calm down Simon, he is bound to be here any time soon." Brandon said in a irritated tone.

Book of Characters

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I think I need to prepare my characters and create more depth to them. Not knowing where to put these I decided here would be the best option.

So, if you would please take the time to check out the character I will eventually place here and give me pointers on how to increase their depth and how to write the character description better. Thankyou :)

Past the Tall Trees We Feared

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A small village known as River Creek is border by skyscraping trees that embraced their homes. Though the villagers are given comfort by these monstrous trees, but they also fear them; This armada of trees is known as "The Death Locked Forest".

Best movie trilogy

Back to the Future
14% (1 vote)
I'm wrong...okay, Lord of the Rings / Game of Thrones (handicap)
71% (5 votes)
Any three Harry Potter films
0% (0 votes)
I'm the most wrong because I don't like any of these
14% (1 vote)
Total votes: 7

Perfection

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How I wish this fractured mirror reflection would lie to me

Twisting, contorting, to be the pretty picture you want me to be

If only I could turn back time and wipe my soiled slate clean

Burying, hiding, so I can masquerade as pure and pristine

Chapter Thirty-Three

CHAPTER THIRTY-THREE

Hang on.’ Summer’s suddenly exuberant thought cut across the Aether, to the Nexus. ‘I Think... Yes! I have her!’

 

Death of a Salesman Prolong

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[Ensuing his suicide at the end of Arthur Miller's play, Willy Loman meets his elder brother in the afterlife.] 

 

Literary Quarter in Heaven

 

The Curious Butterfly

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Parched white paper
Was anything ever written there?
Oh yes, oh yes the sweetness of life
With honey, nectar and spice.

The curious little butterfly dropped by
Just to have a sip or two
Drew in some nectar, then more and more
A strange seduction that she never knew before.

Understanding

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AN:Hey guys, it's been a while. Well, I'm back with some poetry, and while I feel this piece isn't particularly strong I felt like sharing it. I will say that critiques are welcome as always, but I  would like to ask that you be gentle in this particular case, because this poem is awfully personal for me.

They've won.

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Everyday with this sadness.

On the edge of certain madness.

 

Malevolent whispers in the dark.

Twisted thoughts have left their mark.

 

Other people, whom I can't relate.

Have left me in a contorted state.

 

The days end as the Sun begins to fall.

Personal demons grow upon the wall.

 

Viral Video: Achmed the Dead Terrorist

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Chapter Thirty-One

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CHAPTER THIRTY-ONE

 

Chapter Thirty-Two

CHAPTER THIRTY-TWO

 

‘OKAY; what’s the quickest route out of here?’ Helen drifted along the link, her relief evident in her thoughts.

 

Troubles

So... just a quick one, nothing fun or quirky, just letting ya'll know that I haven't been on cause my aunt passed away last wednesday.

 

It seems every time i try to be active here something pulls me away... I'll be back and reading in a bit, sorry to all the posters i missed

Confusion

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My inibility to be in peace makes me restless
This object in my way makes the same occurace
Night after night after night
Making my mind twisted, and frustrated
Though I may not know what is happening
I do know that my ability to cope with it
Is wearing thin
Its horrible to not be able to understand

I Wish

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My love for you is unconditional,
My love for you will never stop,
But I'm so confused,
I don't know where to start.

You took your love away,
And left me with nothing,
So, I'm left here so empty,
Full of doubt and confusion.

When

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I miss you,
When you're gone.
I miss the way you hold me,
When you're gone.
I miss your kisses on my forehead,
When you're gone.
I miss your smile,
The way it crawls across your face,
When you're gone.
I miss your hands,
Just caressing mine,
When you're gone.

Untitled!

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I don't know how this could happen,
I'm dying deep within.
Why do you keep on doing it?
It's killing more than my skin.

I'm doubting that you care,
Frankly, I don't care if YOU fall.
But I don't want the only thing left of me,
To be a stupid picture on the wall.

Two~Sides!!

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There's two sides within me,
There's good and there's bad.
Heaven and Hell,
It's like two totally different lads.

One's telling me he isn't worth it,
This is how it should be.
But the other side still longs,
For the past; you and me!!

That Night

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Everything was perfect,
I was in a blissful peace.
But then you took me outside,
For a heartbroken release.

How I feel is not important,
At least, not to me.
I want to know how you feel,
I wasn't crying as hard as thee.

Thank You

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I see Your face in my heart,
You're skin's so soft in my mind.
But the background is where I'm lost,
I'm facing in rewind.

It's hard to stay on track,
And I'm sorry if I fall off the path.
But, please, give me forgiveness,
It's like a cleansing bath.

Rumours

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Are they true?
Are they lies?
Who knows for sure?
But you have to decide.

When you first find out,
It's such a surprise.
Tell "them" how you feel,
And don't compromise.

Memories!!

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Memories cross through my mind,
Explorers so close to home.
Potential smiles transform to grins,
But once more I am alone.

We were happy beyond happy,
We were in love but furthermore.
Love was but a wasted product,
Sand washed up from the shore.

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Best movie trilogy
Back to the Future
14%
I'm wrong...okay, Lord of the Rings / Game of Thrones (handicap)
71%
Any three Harry Potter films
0%
I'm the most wrong because I don't like any of these
14%
Total votes: 7